Moment In Time Project In the moment in time project we created a story that has changed or effected our lives in some way. We learned, and used descriptive writing. We learned how to write without thought verbs. We also practiced or revision skills by making several drafts.
In this project I learned to broaden my writing capabilities in a lot of ways. I have heard how to write descriptively, as well as becoming more confident on my sentence structure. I learned the ingredients to creating a strong story is descriptive writing with no thought verbs, grammatical arrears with a setting that doesn't just start the story but extends through the hole story. We tell stories in order to pass along information so it can be remembered for along to me. This transform when a story is written about a personal experience by keeping an important part of yourself alive and known for your family or friends. Narrative weighting has helped me grow as a better writer not only for this project, but to carry out in current and future projects. What stood out to me most in this project is the fact that I remembered so many details about an event that happened so long ago. The most difficult part for me was trying to stay in the one-page range. I tried not to go over the one page in the beginning of the project because I new I would get attached to most of the story and it would have exuded one page. So I kept my drafts as shot as possible and left out some parts that even though I wanted I couldn't fit. I also struggled with this as I tried to wrap up my story. I felt rushed so I didn't reach the ending I would have liked and been pleased with. I would have change the way I ended my story I was not happy with the ending. Up to the last two paragraphs I was pleased with but after that I think I could have worked on it more. The most important personal lesson I learned is that the smallest events can change your life. If I hadn't been at that dance I may not have had the same experience with dance. There would have been a greater chance of me not becoming a dancer. I grew as a person because writing about this event made me remember why I started dance and why I have kept up with it my whole life. |
Extension Project
Challenge Extension
I will be creating an oil painting, the Image will be of a dancer in the style of Anna Razumovskaya.
I will have to learn how to oil paint. I will learn this from tutorials from youtube. And the help of others. And my work will be based off of Anna Razumovskaya. Anna Razumovskaya is best known for her classic, romantic figures that carry a sense of elegance and grace. They carry an aura associated with the Renaissance yet due to her signature expressive, dynamic technique they are refreshingly modern.(http://www.anna-art.com/artist/anna_razumovskaya.html)
I will be going deeper into learning to learn other artists style of art. I will also be telling my story through color and vibrancy to express how beautiful dance is to
me.
This extension will be challenging to me because I have never attempted to oil paint. I will ensure this by completing my painting with oil paints.
I will have to learn how to oil paint. I will learn this from tutorials from youtube. And the help of others. And my work will be based off of Anna Razumovskaya. Anna Razumovskaya is best known for her classic, romantic figures that carry a sense of elegance and grace. They carry an aura associated with the Renaissance yet due to her signature expressive, dynamic technique they are refreshingly modern.(http://www.anna-art.com/artist/anna_razumovskaya.html)
I will be going deeper into learning to learn other artists style of art. I will also be telling my story through color and vibrancy to express how beautiful dance is to
me.
This extension will be challenging to me because I have never attempted to oil paint. I will ensure this by completing my painting with oil paints.